A Villanelle
Oo this line: "Sight without faith leaves nothing but complaint" - so good...I must ponder that more
Thank you Justin. This poem seems to be speaking more to me than I’m understanding.
If possible, and if it’s not an offensive request, can you elaborate on what these lines might mean? —
“What you don't see is still your own constraint
Unveiled through a secret, unopened door.”
I feel like you’re touching something true but I’m not quite grasping or comprehending what you’re touching.
Thanks for asking, Barbara. It's sort of a meditation on the way our behaviors and emotions come out in ways we don't expect or recognize, but that they aren't random, and need to be explored to be understood.
Oo this line: "Sight without faith leaves nothing but complaint" - so good...I must ponder that more
Thank you Justin. This poem seems to be speaking more to me than I’m understanding.
If possible, and if it’s not an offensive request, can you elaborate on what these lines might mean? —
“What you don't see is still your own constraint
Unveiled through a secret, unopened door.”
I feel like you’re touching something true but I’m not quite grasping or comprehending what you’re touching.
Thanks for asking, Barbara. It's sort of a meditation on the way our behaviors and emotions come out in ways we don't expect or recognize, but that they aren't random, and need to be explored to be understood.